On a third playthrough, and it's obviously a classic but damn the typos, broken English and clunky writing can be jarring sometimes haha, lack of punctuation, clunky delivery, weird spelling like "upsi" for oopsie, etc.
If English isn't your first language it's still an amazing job, the worldbuilding, characters, dialog, still great and I definitely love what you've done, some of the most creative animations for the abilities.
But if you want a proofreader, id happily do it, just send me the script and I can give it a run through and fix it all, or I can do it in ren'py and send it back? Idk.
It's really the only criticism I have in this otherwise awesome avn id definitely put up there close to Eternum/ripples/cosy cafe
A newcomer to the story but I hope the situation gets taken care of soon. Anyone passing by and reading this, give it a try, and, hopefully, support the creator especially during their current endeavors!
Please read to get a better idea if you want to try out this game( you do ;] )
To set the tone for this review this game is the reason i put any effort for making accounts to even post a review for a adult game. i never cared about doing this for any other game. heck i never read the lines word for word on any adult games before. i got sucked into this games world and now im hooked. Let me explain why.
First of all i like games where the mc either starts of strong or slowly becomes OP. Where the Mc could go evil or could go good depending on the situation happening to them. i like stuff involving super powers...where if someone hurts the mc's friend hell take care of who did it because he is strong enough to do so. There is still animation in this version ( fight scenes).if any of that is in your interest wheel house please keep reading.
As you progress through the storyline you will feel emotions...up and downs..things i never thought a mere Renpy game would make me feel. the music Berk put into this game during certain scenes is spot on. it helps you feel exactly what he is trying to convey. heck im listening to one of the songs right now as i type this review. I actually binged all of the first 10 chapters in 1 night ( before 11 came out) and didnt even go to sleep just went straight to work after. i had to know what was going to happen.
If you read Berks post on patreon you can tell he really enjoys this and is always mentioning new things he wants to try...like during a battle scene having 15( not ea( not exactly just a # i picked) different things going on in 1 frame and as each frame progresses each of those 15 things are doing something else instead of the usual 1 thing happening each frame. He will tell you exactly whats going on in his life and doesnt leave you guessing if the game wil continue or when the next chapter might be. He will always respond to you when he is able.
This game is so good it doesnt even need the scenes that were taken out for the new itch friendly version. if you like anime its like experiencing your favorite one for the first time all over again.
This is the only game i cant have not be finished. This is the only game ill write a review on every site just to help make sure it stays around. If what i said in my 2nd paragraph speaks to you then give this a chance...and if you havent played a game with those qualities at the for front of what you usually play..then make this thge first one you experience. you can tell her works hard on each chapter and the comments he gets on patreon shows the loyality he brings out of his subscribers. he had the for sight to start making this game itch friendly before it went to hell these last couple days because he cares about his creation. not too many creators have thought that far ahead yet. I think that basically covers the main idea i want to get across but il ledit this if i think of any other mentions i forgot.
The O.G. version is on my Mount Rushmore of VNs. Berkili4 cares about storytelling, world building, character depth, as well as his supporters. Please give this a try and if you want the "director's cut" I implore you to check it out through his Patreon.
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Nice game
On a third playthrough, and it's obviously a classic but damn the typos, broken English and clunky writing can be jarring sometimes haha, lack of punctuation, clunky delivery, weird spelling like "upsi" for oopsie, etc.
If English isn't your first language it's still an amazing job, the worldbuilding, characters, dialog, still great and I definitely love what you've done, some of the most creative animations for the abilities.
But if you want a proofreader, id happily do it, just send me the script and I can give it a run through and fix it all, or I can do it in ren'py and send it back? Idk.
It's really the only criticism I have in this otherwise awesome avn id definitely put up there close to Eternum/ripples/cosy cafe
Is this the season two or just clone from season 1?
Love the game since i have found it
the story is one of the best VN i have ever played with the likes of Ripples, Eternum and My Bully is my lover/Sicae
I Absolutely recommend anyone to play it
Best action scenes i have ever seen in an VN
All in all a 10/10 game
Totally agree... tried crossed realms
When will the main story completed?
11/10. This novel isn’t just good — it’s legendary. Every chapter hits harder than the last!
I really hope this whole situation gets fixed or a new alternative is found. This is without a doubt in my mind the best AVN out there
If you love VN's. You'll love this game, it's endearing and heart warming. While also being hilarious.
作者，Android版本的好糊呀，为什么才1.6GB呢
As always companion of the darkness are one of the best games I played along with LH, MBML and others hope the issue will reaolve
Very well made, enjoyable game, I could not put it down
A newcomer to the story but I hope the situation gets taken care of soon. Anyone passing by and reading this, give it a try, and, hopefully, support the creator especially during their current endeavors!
Highly Recommended!
One of the best visual novels I've ever tried take my advice and play it.
Please read to get a better idea if you want to try out this game( you do ;] )
To set the tone for this review this game is the reason i put any effort for making accounts to even post a review for a adult game. i never cared about doing this for any other game. heck i never read the lines word for word on any adult games before. i got sucked into this games world and now im hooked. Let me explain why.
First of all i like games where the mc either starts of strong or slowly becomes OP. Where the Mc could go evil or could go good depending on the situation happening to them. i like stuff involving super powers...where if someone hurts the mc's friend hell take care of who did it because he is strong enough to do so. There is still animation in this version ( fight scenes).if any of that is in your interest wheel house please keep reading.
As you progress through the storyline you will feel emotions...up and downs..things i never thought a mere Renpy game would make me feel. the music Berk put into this game during certain scenes is spot on. it helps you feel exactly what he is trying to convey. heck im listening to one of the songs right now as i type this review. I actually binged all of the first 10 chapters in 1 night ( before 11 came out) and didnt even go to sleep just went straight to work after. i had to know what was going to happen.
If you read Berks post on patreon you can tell he really enjoys this and is always mentioning new things he wants to try...like during a battle scene having 15( not ea( not exactly just a # i picked) different things going on in 1 frame and as each frame progresses each of those 15 things are doing something else instead of the usual 1 thing happening each frame. He will tell you exactly whats going on in his life and doesnt leave you guessing if the game wil continue or when the next chapter might be. He will always respond to you when he is able.
This game is so good it doesnt even need the scenes that were taken out for the new itch friendly version. if you like anime its like experiencing your favorite one for the first time all over again.
This is the only game i cant have not be finished. This is the only game ill write a review on every site just to help make sure it stays around. If what i said in my 2nd paragraph speaks to you then give this a chance...and if you havent played a game with those qualities at the for front of what you usually play..then make this thge first one you experience. you can tell her works hard on each chapter and the comments he gets on patreon shows the loyality he brings out of his subscribers. he had the for sight to start making this game itch friendly before it went to hell these last couple days because he cares about his creation. not too many creators have thought that far ahead yet. I think that basically covers the main idea i want to get across but il ledit this if i think of any other mentions i forgot.
GOTY fr 🔥🔥
遊戲很好玩期待更多的更新
The O.G. version is on my Mount Rushmore of VNs. Berkili4 cares about storytelling, world building, character depth, as well as his supporters. Please give this a try and if you want the "director's cut" I implore you to check it out through his Patreon.
intresting idea and I hope u contiune with your other game as well despite the old hags and pament prossesers trying to minipulate deves