On a third playthrough, and it's obviously a classic but damn the typos, broken English and clunky writing can be jarring sometimes haha, lack of punctuation, clunky delivery, weird spelling like "upsi" for oopsie, etc.
If English isn't your first language it's still an amazing job, the worldbuilding, characters, dialog, still great and I definitely love what you've done, some of the most creative animations for the abilities.
But if you want a proofreader, id happily do it, just send me the script and I can give it a run through and fix it all, or I can do it in ren'py and send it back? Idk.
It's really the only criticism I have in this otherwise awesome avn id definitely put up there close to Eternum/ripples/cosy cafe
A newcomer to the story but I hope the situation gets taken care of soon. Anyone passing by and reading this, give it a try, and, hopefully, support the creator especially during their current endeavors!
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Great game, should also check out the devs profile for the upgraded version of the game
Supporting Berki
Nice game
On a third playthrough, and it's obviously a classic but damn the typos, broken English and clunky writing can be jarring sometimes haha, lack of punctuation, clunky delivery, weird spelling like "upsi" for oopsie, etc.
If English isn't your first language it's still an amazing job, the worldbuilding, characters, dialog, still great and I definitely love what you've done, some of the most creative animations for the abilities.
But if you want a proofreader, id happily do it, just send me the script and I can give it a run through and fix it all, or I can do it in ren'py and send it back? Idk.
It's really the only criticism I have in this otherwise awesome avn id definitely put up there close to Eternum/ripples/cosy cafe
Is this the season two or just clone from season 1?
Love the game since i have found it
the story is one of the best VN i have ever played with the likes of Ripples, Eternum and My Bully is my lover/Sicae
I Absolutely recommend anyone to play it
Best action scenes i have ever seen in an VN
All in all a 10/10 game
Totally agree... tried crossed realms
When will the main story completed?
11/10. This novel isn’t just good — it’s legendary. Every chapter hits harder than the last!
I really hope this whole situation gets fixed or a new alternative is found. This is without a doubt in my mind the best AVN out there
If you love VN's. You'll love this game, it's endearing and heart warming. While also being hilarious.
作者，Android版本的好糊呀，为什么才1.6GB呢
As always companion of the darkness are one of the best games I played along with LH, MBML and others hope the issue will reaolve
Very well made, enjoyable game, I could not put it down
A newcomer to the story but I hope the situation gets taken care of soon. Anyone passing by and reading this, give it a try, and, hopefully, support the creator especially during their current endeavors!
Highly Recommended!