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I've finished the game so far, and I'm amazed at how immersive the adventure of this game can be, lots of twists and surprises, badass characters and beautiful girls, especially Noel who is my favorite by far, congratulations to Dev, very creative for writing a story with so many details :)

Haha happy to hear that.
Im glad you liked the game :P

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Good afternoon, would it be possible to return with apklite? My phone freezes and quits the game during the sex scenes because it's a little old and there are a lot of effects in the game. 

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It would be nice to have the option to lower the graphics/Visual effects  for weaker computers and cell phones in the settings.

That actually doesnt matter, scene all of the special effects are prerendered pictures. So all the programm does is showing an image. I try to keep them as lite as possible.
What i can offer you is a compressed version for the pc, this will have the same values as the app version, but will also look like a mobile version. (worse picture, sound and video quality. Which is not noticeable on a cell phone but very much on pc).

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Hey there, the current apk is the lite version.
The game became so big that a normal version wouldnt work as apk.
At what scene does the game freeze?

It freezes in every scene but it must be because my cell phone is bad and I can only play until the scene where the protagonist has sex with the girl with red hair (I forgot her name)

Hmm i see. Sorry i can´t find a solution for that. you either have to play on pc or skip the scenes.
From chapter 4 onwards the scenes.

The scenes use a different kind of media. so that could work.
I know I am not really helpful, I'm sorry

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absolutely loved the game keep up the great work I cant wait for chapter 5, on another note though is pregnancy planned at all?

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pregnancy is already in the game (even if only very little by now.)
But there will be more pregnancy content. Especially when there are more endings and the story moves forward. Pregnancy is a great way to illustrate the progress of a relationship

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This might be a dumb question but does this game will have non-harem endings?

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there is one, but after you choose it and it plays you go back to the choice to continue the story xD

Lenguage spanish??

Not official. There are some online, but they were not created by me. Only fan translations

Could someone answer me if this game works on my cell phone with it having 2 RAM? It's a moto g 8, the game looks really cool but I'm afraid to go out alone on my phone. (Sorry if my English is very bad, I'm Brazilian and I'm using Google translator)

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To be honest i cant really tell. theoretically it should work, but I can't promise anything. But there should be a spanish version of my game online. Not from me, some fan translations maybe you would enjoy that more

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Game caught my eye while scrolling on itch. Downloaded and played it and I can say it did not disappoint. Story is great and I want more. Hype to play chapter 5 in the future. Hope the dev would keep on improving the game and it's quality like the equipment of characters and effects.

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Im happy that you liked my game, i always try to improve :D

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Amazing game homie. Was surprised how good this is, keep up the great work.

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Aww thank you, im glad that you liked it.

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This one is better than my expectation... Remain on story, very creative ideas you put there(about how dark companion works), many scenes that caught my attention(some references)... Ive seen some similarity of this game it s like the twist of "Eternum"(about game thingy and level high rank stuff) and "Depth Revival"(the school plot, companion and character like Amy similarity to Sarah of this game) 



I like it more than the Eternum you did great kudos to your team 👍 I cant wait the chapter 5, the real battle begin!(maybe the last episode?) And need some Amy exposure that s all ^_^ 


(4.6★/5) for me 

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Thank you very much :P
Btw im a solo-dev no team :D

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That s even more great! ✨ I hope they find this gem game and get s more appreciate 

do the scenes have sounds if not no biggie i will still play 

There are soundeffects and sounds ingame.

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finally got it to download from itchi.io :D the great advancer awaits.  

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Have fun :D

I can't download the game it keeps telling me there a network error, my network works just fine.?

Thats strange. Just tested it i can download completely normal. But there are lot of other place were you can download the game, like lewdzone or f95.

ok thank you :D

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Great game but I gotta say there just seems to be a lot of spelling errors most are minor but I'd have to go back through the game but there was a few times I had to stop and re-read the page a few times before I finally understood what was meant to be said. 

Yes english, grammar and spelling, are really not my strengths. Sorry if this has ruined your experience with the game

Oh no it's fine it's just something I noticed a lot of. If you could go back and proof read some of that or have someone volunteer to do that, that would be nice. But the game is overall good. 

fwiw, here a a few :)


./script.rpy:14105: additionaly->additionally

./script.rpy:16456: apperance->appearance

./script.rpy:14880: controll->control

./script.rpy:5940, ./script.rpy:10482, ./script.rpy:13803, ./script.rpy:13816, ./script.rpy:18382: happend->happened

./script.rpy:21116: memeber->member

./script.rpy:21978: recived->received

./script.rpy:12809, ./script.rpy:14502: remeber->remember

./script.rpy:22368: satelite->satellite

./script.rpy:22551: emma->Emma clara->Clara seperated->separated

./script.rpy:19295, ./script.rpy:21076, ./script.rpy:23093: didnt->didn't

./script.rpy:18897: doesnt->doesn't

./script.rpy:16673, ./script.rpy:22812: isnt->isn't

./script.rpy:727, ./script.rpy:895, ./script.rpy:1189, ./script.rpy:1333, ./script.rpy:1798, ./script.rpy:3117, ./script.rpy:3383, ./script.rpy:19090, ./script.rpy:19204, ./script.rpy:22927: lets->let's

./script.rpy:2912, ./script.rpy:3523, ./script.rpy:4679: wont->won't

./script.rpy:13452: more then->more than

./script.rpy:17156: lets->let

Thank you, fixed it :P

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All I have to say is I hope that isnt the end of Noel I love her

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I like her aswell :D

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Ch 4 was awesome. Hype for ch 5

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Thank you :P

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Ok dude, you are now fucking awesome. You threw war tribe in there, i love that one, and love magna, who made an appearance

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Glad you liked that. Did it now work on your phone?

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I have not gone back to replay yet. I will do so after I finish playing the update.

Just ran through the game again, no glitches or crashes in the areas that gave me issues last time. With that said, at least for my tablet, the issue is resolved

Awesome
thanks for checking

Loved E-4 Tho I would think that Reality it self would stop someone from being so much of an Asshat. Glad B was there to Smack it down some. Shame that someone/thing cannot drain it down to a Single S.

Im happy that you liked chapter 4

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Very good VN.  tho Same as Dominornex in 3-4 Places i had only Black screens, and one that said it was Missing a Pic.
Now I would have thought the #4 would go to Clare's Mom Not a Young Adult (even if it did not work out) After all if the Mom got #4 Both Mother and Daughter would have Power and more than Likely Help the MC out

Tho i think that the first words out of Metals Dark one would have been something that would help Matt Out not send him of a Revenge Hunt.

Hey there, I am glad that you liked it, the problems should be fixed with the release of chapter 4.

Which releases at the end of the month

Check the Other Page also Please

What other page?

the Page from the Game page
>>>Submission to r/goodadultgamming jam<<< that Page

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Looked down the forum a bit, but didn't see anything to help, so I will ask. During Clara's masturbation scene, an again During the dream sex. The game keeps crashing. Any suggestions? I just went back and took the road less naughty.  Oh, on android 

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yes i can guess why, it's because the animations are a bit bloated compared to the rest and the can make trouble if loaded.
especially with phones with not so much ram, it can lead to a crash.
good that you messaged me, i have already downsized the files, but will do it again and this time much stronger.
Will release the patch with chapter 4 since its about to be published anyway.

thank you for the reply, and the info.

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sorry to be that guy but i wanna ask - Next update when?

oh i was just waiting for someone to ask...

i think i'll be done with chapter 4 by the end of the month.
one day more or less... but i think that is very realistic

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is this an one kinda girl or an harem?

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It's more harem like, but not every girl is an LI.

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a few typos and missing images

script.rpy:13943: additionaly->additionally

script.rpy:16291: apperance->appearance

script.rpy:14715: controll->control

script.rpy:5787, script.rpy:13656: happend->happened

script.rpy:12649, script.rpy:14337: remeber->remember

script.rpy:16508: isnt->isn't

script.rpy:5371 'bf4' is not an image.

script.rpy:6036 'aa17' is not an image.

script.rpy:6613 'back' is not an image.

script.rpy:6823 'back' is not an image.

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Thanks for pointing ou.t

I'll make sure to fix them when i upload the next update. :D

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looking forward to it - at first the story felt rather cliched (imaginary cute helper, new city, childhood friend and faux mum - classical coming of age male power fantasy) but the unwarranted murder of whatshisname (Michael?) opened up a rather interesting second plot layer

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thanks for the praise, that was exactly my plan. First start with something known and familiar to then present the new and special.

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Absolutely love this game hope to see more

Glad you like it.

I will try to do my best😃

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Got through chapter 2 and really enjoyed it. Loved the action.

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Thank you so much for the praise. I put a lot of effort into the battle scenes.

And you are the first to say that they liked them. Really warms my heart :)

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Happy to hear it. I love a good fight scene, and the images and text worked well together to make them interesting.

Bit unrelated, but (without potentially spoiling too much for others) seeing Noel walk out of the dark with her eyes changed and dragging a person at the same time the music changes was very nicely crafted. Gives a good "alien" feel to it that seems appropriate for an ancient dark creature. Course, I'd say it shows well every time her eyes change. That's a nifty touch.

The alternate ending near the end was neat, too.

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yes this is also one of my favorite scenes.
Hope you will also like chapter 3, it is close to completion.
even if there are a little less fighting scenes

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Looking forward to it.

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You are the first game to let me know to save before the end of the current build, and for that alone you have earned a comment. You being added to my waiting for update folder was because despite some grammar issues I loved the story so far. Good luck on your journey, and thanks for the game.

Lunalis Nocturne

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Thanks for the praise, I'm glad you liked the story.

Yes, I have to accept the criticism with the grammar, English is not my native language and I still have a hard time with it.

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Text could use some outlines to make it easier to read.
Don't forget to change the version number in options.rpy and adding a main menu theme would be nice.
Including your info in the About page is also a good idea.

https://mega.nz/file/qbZl0J6K#v2-SdmtR-kKuWnRcrbeVn2URVVBnoktTsR4l3bdqvDA


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Hey there, thanks for your input. I already outlined the text, but i guess i could make it bigger.

How nice of you to create something like this, I did not expect that. thank you very much

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hey i liked chapter 2 even more, keep up the good work.

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Thank your sir

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thank you so much for your work *w*
I love it! 

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TYSM :)

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Nice

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thanks

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How much time are u investing in this game? also create more patreon roles to us help u

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cMost of my free time at the moment.. I will carefully revise patreon when I publish chapter 2. Currently I don't have much to show, so I would feel bad asking for money right now. Patreon is currently only there so I can link to it.

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Is good to know u are investing time on this project because it has a great pontencial and this prologue is realy good so I'm ansious to know where this is going. So I'll follow ur work

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Thank you for the praise.

Im glad you liked it.

Cant wait to show you guys chapter2 aswell. I just need to get it done :)

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This game was nice. 

Great first chapter.





Recommended by me 

jesus

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Thank you for the recommendation,

mister jesus

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What the? You use Black Alice's theme from MGQ as Noel's?

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Yeah you right. I love this theme.

You know what they say “Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery that mediocrity can pay to greatness.”

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Eeh, i didn't mean it as a bad thing. Most VNs use other people's music as well, won't be a problem unless the original content owners notice and decide to take the copyright issue further. 

Anyway, pretty nice game and plot for a new game, I also want to tell that the APK/Android version has an issue regarding the scene animation, starting from the scene of the Game Girl (sorry i forgot her name) when she was Flicking her Bean, the game lags badly then crashes. Is it just my device or not, I'm not very sure. Although I tried opening the APK file using RAR app to search the video content, i found them as ".ogg" format files. Usually when I do this to other games that usually their animation lag while in game, it wouldn't lag if it is opened outside the game using other media player like VLC. But your .ogg files kind of laggy and can't be played even using VLC this way. I tried restarted device, clean cache etc. game still crashes. The only animations that did play well were the HJ that jerk and MC got. So yeah I think i need to report/ask this.

Also found some typos, like "threated" instead of "threatened" and at some point you made Noel said "U" to MC instead of "you". It's small stuffs, but if you're planning to continue this good game of yours till the end, making it as neat as possible would definitely be better. 

So yeah, i kinda of shut off from the game because of that crash issue above, so i don't know the content further from after the Online Game match then the girl masturbate at night. Overall nice new game with interesting plot.

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Yeah i know that the normal apk app can have issues on some devices. On my Device it works flawlessly but on others it just crashes. Thats why i created a lite version. Reduced the quality abit but should work perfect on (nearly.) all devices.


Well and yes the typos are my Kryptonite. Im not an english native speaker, so alot of it text is a mix between my knoweldge and translators, but i hope it wont distract from the story. If notice any typso you can send them to me and i will fix them. 


Oh  and thank you for the praise.

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Really liked this games and the Girls ♥

Had some fun hours :D also liked the stoy :3


Thank you ♥

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Thank you for the praise.


Happy to hear you had fun.

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came to nut, stayed for the story

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glad to hear that :)

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Absolutely love the story, are and characters! Didn't realize you had a Itch.io page, but glad I found it! Android runs flawlessly. Can't wait for future updates.

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Thank you so much for the praise.

Im glad you enjoyed it :)

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So now a lite androidapk is online.

(Only use it, if the normal apk doesnt work.)

all the images are now somewhat compressed. Lost thereby in resolution but that should make no difference on a cell phone.

Have given the individual animations more time to load and they also are significantly compressed. May disturb the flow and are no longer quite so beautiful but so we achieve better stability. This version is mainly intended for those on which the current version does not run. There are so many different phones and it is only natural that it does not run smoothly on any device.

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The light version runs flawlessly on my phone and no longer crashes. Thank for the update

your welcome

Ah didn't notice there's a lite version of apk, gotta grab soon 👺

please do, the best is yet to come :)

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Played through it and I like it so far, I look forward to seeing where it goes from here. I like the humor put into it and the personality of the characters. The girls are sexy too which is always a good thing.

And while I'm guessing it was a throwaway line, I liked Amy suggesting she and the MC "take turns on" Clara when saying you prefer to be in control. A guy and girl dominating another girl together is a favorite of mine that I find rather rare.

I'll be watching for more. Cheers.

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Thanks :)

Actually it was not a throwaway line.  Something likes this is definitely planned. But it will be avoidable.

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Nice game, the story is cool as far as I played, the character is also nice and I'm looking forward to this game, Though I had an issue while playing the game.

It keeps crashing when I see the animation for almost a half minute, and I can't progress because when the animation is starting, the game is too laggy and won't let me continue, then the game crashed. It keeps repeating and I'm stuck in it wich is the Clara animation while she's touching herself in her room, well I don't want to choose the other option where I won't be able to see the scene, so..:')

I already tried to fix this by clearing the cache(yes im on Android btw) and re-installing the app but it doesn't work, and yes the Amy scene happened to be like this as well where it crashed when I see it for almost a half minute but I manage to get through it somehow by rapidly touching the screen so the dialogue will appear faster and the scene will end up faster so the game won't crash because of the animation, but I can't do the same on Clara scene, it was too laggy and I can't even touch anything when the game started to become laggy so all I can do is see the dialogue changing but with a massive delay because once again, it was too laggy.😭😂

I can't say that my phone is too suck to played the game, I mean my phone can be laggy sometimes but it worked well when playing heavy mobile games and launching other apps.

I stopped playing the game on that scene but I'm still looking forward on the game because I can see the potential in this game and I'm still curious about the story cause I can't progress to the end of the game in this version cause of the lag lol, I will play the game again ASAP if I manage to get rid of the lag because if I skipped the animation I won't be able to play it with full of experience and I hate that.

But keep up the good work dev! I will be so happy and appreciate it if you'll be able to fix my issue with the game but it depends on you anyway, maybe my phone is suck after all lol.💀

first of im glad you liked it so far. May i ask what android you are using? I maybe have a solution in mind gimme a day or two

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I have the same problem but my phone is samsung galaxy a12. During s*x scenes my phone getting lag. I really love ur gme btw keep up the good work. I really hope to fix this issue. Thank you 😊

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Okay hope you could atleast finish the game. I think i can solve this. An updated version will be live tomorrow. Thank you guys for the patience

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Great! Looking forward to itヾ(*´∇`*)ノ

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Thank you 😊😊

an alternative Android version is now online. Can you please tell me if the new version is also causing problems for you?

It's Oppo F11, and it's a 2019 phone if I remember correctly.

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okay I have never heard of the cell phone, but I looked at it specs, and its not bad. Can you please tell me if the new version also gives you problems?

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Hey, the lite version is way more smooth for me although I can see the difference on the graphic but I don't see any problem with that:) and the size is really decreasing too wich is good for my low storage phone lol, I don't know how you do that but it really helps me! Now that I can and will finish the game, thanks a lot!(﹡ˆ﹀ˆ﹡)

your welcome

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Interesting start to what looks like what will be good game.

I'm a BIG fan of character personality and development in games and this one has plenty of both.

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thank you for the praise!

im glad you liked it

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nice game

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thank you sir

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