looking forward to it - at first the story felt rather cliched (imaginary cute helper, new city, childhood friend and faux mum - classical coming of age male power fantasy) but the unwarranted murder of whatshisname (Michael?) opened up a rather interesting second plot layer
Happy to hear it. I love a good fight scene, and the images and text worked well together to make them interesting.
Bit unrelated, but (without potentially spoiling too much for others) seeing Noel walk out of the dark with her eyes changed and dragging a person at the same time the music changes was very nicely crafted. Gives a good "alien" feel to it that seems appropriate for an ancient dark creature. Course, I'd say it shows well every time her eyes change. That's a nifty touch.
yes this is also one of my favorite scenes. Hope you will also like chapter 3, it is close to completion. even if there are a little less fighting scenes
You are the first game to let me know to save before the end of the current build, and for that alone you have earned a comment. You being added to my waiting for update folder was because despite some grammar issues I loved the story so far. Good luck on your journey, and thanks for the game.
Text could use some outlines to make it easier to read. Don't forget to change the version number in options.rpy and adding a main menu theme would be nice. Including your info in the About page is also a good idea.
cMost of my free time at the moment.. I will carefully revise patreon when I publish chapter 2. Currently I don't have much to show, so I would feel bad asking for money right now. Patreon is currently only there so I can link to it.
Is good to know u are investing time on this project because it has a great pontencial and this prologue is realy good so I'm ansious to know where this is going. So I'll follow ur work
Eeh, i didn't mean it as a bad thing. Most VNs use other people's music as well, won't be a problem unless the original content owners notice and decide to take the copyright issue further.
Anyway, pretty nice game and plot for a new game, I also want to tell that the APK/Android version has an issue regarding the scene animation, starting from the scene of the Game Girl (sorry i forgot her name) when she was Flicking her Bean, the game lags badly then crashes. Is it just my device or not, I'm not very sure. Although I tried opening the APK file using RAR app to search the video content, i found them as ".ogg" format files. Usually when I do this to other games that usually their animation lag while in game, it wouldn't lag if it is opened outside the game using other media player like VLC. But your .ogg files kind of laggy and can't be played even using VLC this way. I tried restarted device, clean cache etc. game still crashes. The only animations that did play well were the HJ that jerk and MC got. So yeah I think i need to report/ask this.
Also found some typos, like "threated" instead of "threatened" and at some point you made Noel said "U" to MC instead of "you". It's small stuffs, but if you're planning to continue this good game of yours till the end, making it as neat as possible would definitely be better.
So yeah, i kinda of shut off from the game because of that crash issue above, so i don't know the content further from after the Online Game match then the girl masturbate at night. Overall nice new game with interesting plot.
Yeah i know that the normal apk app can have issues on some devices. On my Device it works flawlessly but on others it just crashes. Thats why i created a lite version. Reduced the quality abit but should work perfect on (nearly.) all devices.
Well and yes the typos are my Kryptonite. Im not an english native speaker, so alot of it text is a mix between my knoweldge and translators, but i hope it wont distract from the story. If notice any typso you can send them to me and i will fix them.
Absolutely love the story, are and characters! Didn't realize you had a Itch.io page, but glad I found it! Android runs flawlessly. Can't wait for future updates.
all the images are now somewhat compressed. Lost thereby in resolution but that should make no difference on a cell phone.
Have given the individual animations more time to load and they also are significantly compressed. May disturb the flow and are no longer quite so beautiful but so we achieve better stability.
This version is mainly intended for those on which the current version does not run. There are so many different phones and it is only natural that it does not run smoothly on any device.
Played through it and I like it so far, I look forward to seeing where it goes from here. I like the humor put into it and the personality of the characters. The girls are sexy too which is always a good thing.
And while I'm guessing it was a throwaway line, I liked Amy suggesting she and the MC "take turns on" Clara when saying you prefer to be in control. A guy and girl dominating another girl together is a favorite of mine that I find rather rare.
Nice game, the story is cool as far as I played, the character is also nice and I'm looking forward to this game, Though I had an issue while playing the game.
It keeps crashing when I see the animation for almost a half minute, and I can't progress because when the animation is starting, the game is too laggy and won't let me continue, then the game crashed. It keeps repeating and I'm stuck in it wich is the Clara animation while she's touching herself in her room, well I don't want to choose the other option where I won't be able to see the scene, so..:')
I already tried to fix this by clearing the cache(yes im on Android btw) and re-installing the app but it doesn't work, and yes the Amy scene happened to be like this as well where it crashed when I see it for almost a half minute but I manage to get through it somehow by rapidly touching the screen so the dialogue will appear faster and the scene will end up faster so the game won't crash because of the animation, but I can't do the same on Clara scene, it was too laggy and I can't even touch anything when the game started to become laggy so all I can do is see the dialogue changing but with a massive delay because once again, it was too laggy.😭😂
I can't say that my phone is too suck to played the game, I mean my phone can be laggy sometimes but it worked well when playing heavy mobile games and launching other apps.
I stopped playing the game on that scene but I'm still looking forward on the game because I can see the potential in this game and I'm still curious about the story cause I can't progress to the end of the game in this version cause of the lag lol, I will play the game again ASAP if I manage to get rid of the lag because if I skipped the animation I won't be able to play it with full of experience and I hate that.
But keep up the good work dev! I will be so happy and appreciate it if you'll be able to fix my issue with the game but it depends on you anyway, maybe my phone is suck after all lol.💀
I have the same problem but my phone is samsung galaxy a12. During s*x scenes my phone getting lag. I really love ur gme btw keep up the good work. I really hope to fix this issue. Thank you 😊
okay I have never heard of the cell phone, but I looked at it specs, and its not bad. Can you please tell me if the new version also gives you problems?
Hey, the lite version is way more smooth for me although I can see the difference on the graphic but I don't see any problem with that:) and the size is really decreasing too wich is good for my low storage phone lol, I don't know how you do that but it really helps me! Now that I can and will finish the game, thanks a lot!(﹡ˆ﹀ˆ﹡)
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is this an one kinda girl or an harem?
It's more harem like, but not every girl is an LI.
a few typos and missing images
script.rpy:13943: additionaly->additionally
script.rpy:16291: apperance->appearance
script.rpy:14715: controll->control
script.rpy:5787, script.rpy:13656: happend->happened
script.rpy:12649, script.rpy:14337: remeber->remember
script.rpy:16508: isnt->isn't
script.rpy:5371 'bf4' is not an image.
script.rpy:6036 'aa17' is not an image.
script.rpy:6613 'back' is not an image.
script.rpy:6823 'back' is not an image.
Thanks for pointing ou.t
I'll make sure to fix them when i upload the next update. :D
looking forward to it - at first the story felt rather cliched (imaginary cute helper, new city, childhood friend and faux mum - classical coming of age male power fantasy) but the unwarranted murder of whatshisname (Michael?) opened up a rather interesting second plot layer
thanks for the praise, that was exactly my plan. First start with something known and familiar to then present the new and special.
Absolutely love this game hope to see more
Glad you like it.
I will try to do my best😃
Got through chapter 2 and really enjoyed it. Loved the action.
Thank you so much for the praise. I put a lot of effort into the battle scenes.
And you are the first to say that they liked them. Really warms my heart :)
Happy to hear it. I love a good fight scene, and the images and text worked well together to make them interesting.
Bit unrelated, but (without potentially spoiling too much for others) seeing Noel walk out of the dark with her eyes changed and dragging a person at the same time the music changes was very nicely crafted. Gives a good "alien" feel to it that seems appropriate for an ancient dark creature. Course, I'd say it shows well every time her eyes change. That's a nifty touch.
The alternate ending near the end was neat, too.
yes this is also one of my favorite scenes.
Hope you will also like chapter 3, it is close to completion.
even if there are a little less fighting scenes
Looking forward to it.
You are the first game to let me know to save before the end of the current build, and for that alone you have earned a comment. You being added to my waiting for update folder was because despite some grammar issues I loved the story so far. Good luck on your journey, and thanks for the game.
Lunalis Nocturne
Thanks for the praise, I'm glad you liked the story.
Yes, I have to accept the criticism with the grammar, English is not my native language and I still have a hard time with it.
Text could use some outlines to make it easier to read.
Don't forget to change the version number in options.rpy and adding a main menu theme would be nice.
Including your info in the About page is also a good idea.
https://mega.nz/file/qbZl0J6K#v2-SdmtR-kKuWnRcrbeVn2URVVBnoktTsR4l3bdqvDA
Hey there, thanks for your input. I already outlined the text, but i guess i could make it bigger.
How nice of you to create something like this, I did not expect that. thank you very much
hey i liked chapter 2 even more, keep up the good work.
Thank your sir
thank you so much for your work *w*
I love it!
TYSM :)
Nice
thanks
How much time are u investing in this game? also create more patreon roles to us help u
cMost of my free time at the moment.. I will carefully revise patreon when I publish chapter 2. Currently I don't have much to show, so I would feel bad asking for money right now. Patreon is currently only there so I can link to it.
Is good to know u are investing time on this project because it has a great pontencial and this prologue is realy good so I'm ansious to know where this is going. So I'll follow ur work
Thank you for the praise.
Im glad you liked it.
Cant wait to show you guys chapter2 aswell. I just need to get it done :)
This game was nice.
Great first chapter.
Recommended by me
jesus
Thank you for the recommendation,
mister jesus
What the? You use Black Alice's theme from MGQ as Noel's?
Yeah you right. I love this theme.
You know what they say “Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery that mediocrity can pay to greatness.”
Eeh, i didn't mean it as a bad thing. Most VNs use other people's music as well, won't be a problem unless the original content owners notice and decide to take the copyright issue further.
Anyway, pretty nice game and plot for a new game, I also want to tell that the APK/Android version has an issue regarding the scene animation, starting from the scene of the Game Girl (sorry i forgot her name) when she was Flicking her Bean, the game lags badly then crashes. Is it just my device or not, I'm not very sure. Although I tried opening the APK file using RAR app to search the video content, i found them as ".ogg" format files. Usually when I do this to other games that usually their animation lag while in game, it wouldn't lag if it is opened outside the game using other media player like VLC. But your .ogg files kind of laggy and can't be played even using VLC this way. I tried restarted device, clean cache etc. game still crashes. The only animations that did play well were the HJ that jerk and MC got. So yeah I think i need to report/ask this.
Also found some typos, like "threated" instead of "threatened" and at some point you made Noel said "U" to MC instead of "you". It's small stuffs, but if you're planning to continue this good game of yours till the end, making it as neat as possible would definitely be better.
So yeah, i kinda of shut off from the game because of that crash issue above, so i don't know the content further from after the Online Game match then the girl masturbate at night. Overall nice new game with interesting plot.
Yeah i know that the normal apk app can have issues on some devices. On my Device it works flawlessly but on others it just crashes. Thats why i created a lite version. Reduced the quality abit but should work perfect on (nearly.) all devices.
Well and yes the typos are my Kryptonite. Im not an english native speaker, so alot of it text is a mix between my knoweldge and translators, but i hope it wont distract from the story. If notice any typso you can send them to me and i will fix them.
Oh and thank you for the praise.
Really liked this games and the Girls ♥
Had some fun hours :D also liked the stoy :3
Thank you ♥
Thank you for the praise.
Happy to hear you had fun.
came to nut, stayed for the story
glad to hear that :)
Absolutely love the story, are and characters! Didn't realize you had a Itch.io page, but glad I found it! Android runs flawlessly. Can't wait for future updates.
Thank you so much for the praise.
Im glad you enjoyed it :)
So now a lite androidapk is online.
(Only use it, if the normal apk doesnt work.)
all the images are now somewhat compressed. Lost thereby in resolution but that should make no difference on a cell phone.
Have given the individual animations more time to load and they also are significantly compressed. May disturb the flow and are no longer quite so beautiful but so we achieve better stability. This version is mainly intended for those on which the current version does not run. There are so many different phones and it is only natural that it does not run smoothly on any device.
The light version runs flawlessly on my phone and no longer crashes. Thank for the update
your welcome
Ah didn't notice there's a lite version of apk, gotta grab soon 👺
please do, the best is yet to come :)
Played through it and I like it so far, I look forward to seeing where it goes from here. I like the humor put into it and the personality of the characters. The girls are sexy too which is always a good thing.
And while I'm guessing it was a throwaway line, I liked Amy suggesting she and the MC "take turns on" Clara when saying you prefer to be in control. A guy and girl dominating another girl together is a favorite of mine that I find rather rare.
I'll be watching for more. Cheers.
Thanks :)
Actually it was not a throwaway line. Something likes this is definitely planned. But it will be avoidable.
Nice game, the story is cool as far as I played, the character is also nice and I'm looking forward to this game, Though I had an issue while playing the game.
It keeps crashing when I see the animation for almost a half minute, and I can't progress because when the animation is starting, the game is too laggy and won't let me continue, then the game crashed. It keeps repeating and I'm stuck in it wich is the Clara animation while she's touching herself in her room, well I don't want to choose the other option where I won't be able to see the scene, so..:')
I already tried to fix this by clearing the cache(yes im on Android btw) and re-installing the app but it doesn't work, and yes the Amy scene happened to be like this as well where it crashed when I see it for almost a half minute but I manage to get through it somehow by rapidly touching the screen so the dialogue will appear faster and the scene will end up faster so the game won't crash because of the animation, but I can't do the same on Clara scene, it was too laggy and I can't even touch anything when the game started to become laggy so all I can do is see the dialogue changing but with a massive delay because once again, it was too laggy.😭😂
I can't say that my phone is too suck to played the game, I mean my phone can be laggy sometimes but it worked well when playing heavy mobile games and launching other apps.
I stopped playing the game on that scene but I'm still looking forward on the game because I can see the potential in this game and I'm still curious about the story cause I can't progress to the end of the game in this version cause of the lag lol, I will play the game again ASAP if I manage to get rid of the lag because if I skipped the animation I won't be able to play it with full of experience and I hate that.
But keep up the good work dev! I will be so happy and appreciate it if you'll be able to fix my issue with the game but it depends on you anyway, maybe my phone is suck after all lol.💀
first of im glad you liked it so far. May i ask what android you are using? I maybe have a solution in mind gimme a day or two
I have the same problem but my phone is samsung galaxy a12. During s*x scenes my phone getting lag. I really love ur gme btw keep up the good work. I really hope to fix this issue. Thank you 😊
Okay hope you could atleast finish the game. I think i can solve this. An updated version will be live tomorrow. Thank you guys for the patience
Great! Looking forward to itヾ(*´∇`*)ﾉ
Thank you 😊😊
an alternative Android version is now online. Can you please tell me if the new version is also causing problems for you?
It's Oppo F11, and it's a 2019 phone if I remember correctly.
okay I have never heard of the cell phone, but I looked at it specs, and its not bad. Can you please tell me if the new version also gives you problems?
Hey, the lite version is way more smooth for me although I can see the difference on the graphic but I don't see any problem with that:) and the size is really decreasing too wich is good for my low storage phone lol, I don't know how you do that but it really helps me! Now that I can and will finish the game, thanks a lot!(﹡ˆ﹀ˆ﹡)
your welcome
Interesting start to what looks like what will be good game.
I'm a BIG fan of character personality and development in games and this one has plenty of both.
thank you for the praise!
im glad you liked it
nice game
thank you sir