Oh my gosh, 5 stars straight away! This is like a community game from 20 years ago, where players voluntarily pay, and this environment is rare. I hope the author stays happy every day! Life first, and making games according to your own preferences is great!
When is the next chapter going to come out? I have become really attached to the game I really want to find out what happens with the situation at the end. I also would become a patreon if I had the money I'll be the highest tier you got that's how much I loved your work
"When is the next chapter going to come out?" When its ready :P Also, please look after yourself first, before you support. The game is free and will stay free.
I’ll admit, when I first launched the game, I had mixed feelings. I openly expected a C-grade movie storyline - something like "Zombies Beavers 2." I decided to give the game a chance, and I don't regret it. The plot and music completely won me over, and I’m really looking forward to the continuation. A good production deserves support, so I’ll probably decide to patronize it soon.
Noel is my favorite character. I didn’t expect that an entity born of darkness and living for thousands of years (or even longer) could be so attached to a human and feel such deep emotions. I’m really curious how her relationship with the MC will develop. She is my TOP1 girl.
I’m also rooting for Rule B – I believe his story deserves a continuation. Especially because his relationship with Nael is much more mature. Who knows? Perhaps the younger siblings will come to their aid at some point.
Arsa is really well designed. Her temperament, combined with her capriciousness and humor, gives the whole story a pleasant lightness. The humor is at a good level.
Amy is sweet, and like Noel, she is a great support for the MC. I’m curious how the situation with her... belly will unfold. :)
I have mixed feelings about Clara. She's a nice girl, and at the beginning, I was sure that it was with her that the MC would build a lasting relationship. However, somewhere along the story, she got left behind. As a result, her feelings for the MC have to give way to other relationships, as we simply don’t spend any time with her. Poor girl but that's how sometimes life work.
okay that is weird, i just downloaded the game and it worked fine for me. i would love to drop you another link but i dont know if i am allowed to promote another store here. if you join the discord and ask for a link there, i would glady share it with you.
Absolutely fantastic game! First of all, thank you for being able to create such a wonderful story!
I love cod very, very much, and would like it to be enjoyed by more people. Unfortunately the game doesn't support Chinese, for that reason I'm working on a voluntary Chinese translation of the game. So far I've completed a fine translation of chapter1. I'd like to ask you how you feel about this, for or against.
If you are against it I will stop immediately and stop working on it, and delete the results I have so far. If support ...... you don't know how happy I am!
P.S. In my area, sponsorship from overseas authors is very difficult due to policy issues, and I don't have a steady source of income at the moment. I'll fill in once I find a solution.
Hey there,
I think it’s great that you’re translating the game into Chinese! I already have some Chinese players, so making it accessible to even more people would be awesome.
Also, there’s no need to worry about sponsorship. While it does help keep the game alive, it’s more important to me that people take care of themselves first. Otherwise, I wouldn’t feel right accepting the money in good conscience.
Hello, my friend. I really liked your game. A fascinating plot, unique characters with their own twist. I wish you good luck in future episodes. Maybe we will see a sequel in the future in the same game universe :) Don't stop, please. You really have talent.
I'd like to know what the Legion's purpose is. To kill as many dark ones as possible to gain power equal to God's? Everything is clear with the other two alliances. But Legionnaires are a bit strange guys. Especially what makes mere mortals who are not companions help them.
As everyone else said... 10/10, worth every second, minute, and hour.
The adult scenes keep getting better as you progress through the chapters, as does everything else from fight scenes to... hell, it becomes top-notch later on so don't get discouraged early on, though I doubt anyone would...
First of all, I apologize because my English isn’t that great. And secondly, this will be a long comment :3.
If I had to summarize this game in one word, it would be: masterpiece :v. After playing the first two chapters, I thought: the storyline of this game really has potential and opens up so many directions. This game would definitely be on my tier list... And after playing up to chapters 6-7-8. Damn, now I can say this game is at the top 1 of my tier list. There's nothing more to say about the story, it’s simply perfect: the way the characters are built, the way their inner struggles are expressed, their changes and development... truly beyond imagination. And the music, the animation, it really, really gave me goosebumps. I actually replayed some parts right after finishing chapter 9 (currently updated). Right now, I don’t have the financial means to support the devs or to enjoy the upcoming chapters sooner =((( , I really regret and apologize for that. But overall, this is truly a game worth experiencing, and I hope the dev will continue to update this masterpiece.
P/s: Gab and Nael are such a great match; I just hope nothing bad happens to them, but if the dev have plans for them... well, I won’t comment any further...
P/s 2: Could I have some games that people usually recommend? XD
Absolutely LOVED this game! The story was fantastic and found myself completely immersed. I can tell you put a lot of effort and lots of your time into this game. Thank you so much for this masterpiece and I cannot wait for future updates!
Great game! I'm completely immersed in this story. Any game that develops a sense of history/lore automatically has my interest, and this VN takes that and runs with it pretty well!
The only issue I'm currently having with it (and I'm only on Chapter 2, so maybe this won't be a thing for long) is there's a considerable change in the writing from Ch1 to Ch2. Chapter 1 was mostly written well but Chapter 2 could use some serious TLC from a proofreader. I don't want to judge too harshly, not knowing if the writer is a native speaker... but so many run-on sentences, missing or incorrect punctuation, subject-verb agreement, so much seems to be all over the place and at times it's jarring to read and distracting from the actual storytelling, which itself is interesting, engaging, and has me invested.
[EDIT/UPDATE]: Can confirm, this didn't stay an issue for long. There are still things here and there, but I'm down to the last chapter and can say it hasn't been a bothersome distraction ever since. Seems to be much less of an issue in later chapters.
But so far that's my only negative critique, and while it's been distracting many times I've still been able to grasp the story, so in the end it hasn't ruined anything for me and ultimately amounts to a nit-pick. I keep wanting to know more, and there are things happening that I didn't expect which is great!
I'm happy to hear you like it! I didn’t have a proofreader for Chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4. Now, But some people, set up a Discord group dedicated to fixing the spelling issues in my game. The downside is that I have very little time to implement all the improvements, but I’ll do it slowly over time. (My day job and work on the avn steals all of it.) But i managed add the implementations of Chapter 1 so far. Which is probably why you noticed such a big drop in quality afterward.
hey, love the game, really enjoyed it! i did notice some spelling and grammar mistakes here and there tho, didnt take me out of it but they were kind of annoying. if you want to i would offer to help you fix them or fix them for you by just going through all of the old text and correcting everything I notice, let me know if i can help you somehow!
Happy to hear to you liked it. We have on my discord server a small proofreading group, they added alot of suggestions, you can join them as well if you wish.
At first, I played this game with a try it out attitude, but as I continued playing, I found it to be a great game and quickly completed Chapter 9. I am looking forward to its updates and thank you very much for creating this game. I would like to know when its next update will be
Just started, but odd occurrence: had gallery scene 1 in autosave, but it is gone once I moved to main game. That is easy enough to fix, but wondering why?
I mean I unlocked the first gallery scene, but did make an actual save of my own until a few hours later. I think maybe the autosaves had cycled by then, but not sure. At any rate, the first gallery scene now shows as locked, even though I already saw it. Not a big deal; I will try and remember to save after each new scene.
The time and thought that had to put into writing this, is just unmatched. love the Wow reference and such too, still have yet to finish.. wonder what other references there are?
Can't believe this would be the first game I would write a comment on but bravo, the pacing on the story so far is phenomenal, you really manage drag our emotion like a real dark one.
If there is one thing that you nailed with this game is the pacing. The story, events and character development was so in sync that I couldn't stopped playing this game and ended up binging the whole thing in 3 days.
I wish I could support you through patreon but I am sorry I can't just yet. But I definitely want to rate your game on itch. Can anyone tell me how I can do that?
Can anyone recommend where I can get myself a dark one, a primordial would be preferred. Jokes aside, as @NightMarine said, on par with Eternum for me as well. Awesome story, awesome action and I dont just mean the NSFW stuff. The amount of limbs coming off is perfect in my opinion as well. Keep up the good work!
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I rated this game 10/10. I am waiting for next parts. charactor and story was amazing. I really enjoy this.
Happy to hear that you liked it :D
Oh my gosh, 5 stars straight away! This is like a community game from 20 years ago, where players voluntarily pay, and this environment is rare. I hope the author stays happy every day! Life first, and making games according to your own preferences is great!
happy to hear that you enjoyed my little game.
I like your game very much. Can this game be written in Chinese?
Hey there, i can't add chinese, because i don't speak it. <.<
中文不是很简单吗，自己找教程自己汉化了
When is the next chapter going to come out? I have become really attached to the game I really want to find out what happens with the situation at the end. I also would become a patreon if I had the money I'll be the highest tier you got that's how much I loved your work
"When is the next chapter going to come out?"
When its ready :P
Also, please look after yourself first, before you support.
The game is free and will stay free.
how do I get gallery #23?
Be nice to Blake and help her in chapter 4.
I’ll admit, when I first launched the game, I had mixed feelings. I openly expected a C-grade movie storyline - something like "Zombies Beavers 2." I decided to give the game a chance, and I don't regret it. The plot and music completely won me over, and I’m really looking forward to the continuation. A good production deserves support, so I’ll probably decide to patronize it soon.
Hey "Zombies Beavers" is not that bad.
But happy to hear that you like my game :D
I wasn't expecting much from this game but fell in love with it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Hope you will like it :D
so whenever I try to download it keeps saying
"You do not have permission to save to the “(null)” folder."
okay that is weird, i just downloaded the game and it worked fine for me.
i would love to drop you another link but i dont know if i am allowed to promote another store here.
if you join the discord and ask for a link there, i would glady share it with you.
nah i just had to reset my computer and than it work
im guessing the reason why it didn’t work before was because i had deleted an empty filed incorrectly
Absolutely fantastic game! First of all, thank you for being able to create such a wonderful story!
I love cod very, very much, and would like it to be enjoyed by more people. Unfortunately the game doesn't support Chinese, for that reason I'm working on a voluntary Chinese translation of the game. So far I've completed a fine translation of chapter1. I'd like to ask you how you feel about this, for or against.
If you are against it I will stop immediately and stop working on it, and delete the results I have so far. If support ...... you don't know how happy I am!
P.S. In my area, sponsorship from overseas authors is very difficult due to policy issues, and I don't have a steady source of income at the moment. I'll fill in once I find a solution.
Hey there, I think it’s great that you’re translating the game into Chinese! I already have some Chinese players, so making it accessible to even more people would be awesome.
Also, there’s no need to worry about sponsorship. While it does help keep the game alive, it’s more important to me that people take care of themselves first. Otherwise, I wouldn’t feel right accepting the money in good conscience.
辛苦了大佬
Hello, my friend. I really liked your game. A fascinating plot, unique characters with their own twist. I wish you good luck in future episodes. Maybe we will see a sequel in the future in the same game universe :) Don't stop, please. You really have talent.
Happy to hear that you like it.
I'd like to know what the Legion's purpose is. To kill as many dark ones as possible to gain power equal to God's? Everything is clear with the other two alliances. But Legionnaires are a bit strange guys. Especially what makes mere mortals who are not companions help them.
The game looks fun but I have a small question for if I play, do the H scenes have sfx in them?
thanks
some of the newer ones have sfx in them
As everyone else said... 10/10, worth every second, minute, and hour.
The adult scenes keep getting better as you progress through the chapters, as does everything else from fight scenes to... hell, it becomes top-notch later on so don't get discouraged early on, though I doubt anyone would...
Glad to hear that you like it :D
First of all, I apologize because my English isn’t that great. And secondly, this will be a long comment :3.
If I had to summarize this game in one word, it would be: masterpiece :v. After playing the first two chapters, I thought: the storyline of this game really has potential and opens up so many directions. This game would definitely be on my tier list... And after playing up to chapters 6-7-8. Damn, now I can say this game is at the top 1 of my tier list. There's nothing more to say about the story, it’s simply perfect: the way the characters are built, the way their inner struggles are expressed, their changes and development... truly beyond imagination. And the music, the animation, it really, really gave me goosebumps. I actually replayed some parts right after finishing chapter 9 (currently updated). Right now, I don’t have the financial means to support the devs or to enjoy the upcoming chapters sooner =((( , I really regret and apologize for that. But overall, this is truly a game worth experiencing, and I hope the dev will continue to update this masterpiece.
P/s: Gab and Nael are such a great match; I just hope nothing bad happens to them, but if the dev have plans for them... well, I won’t comment any further...
P/s 2: Could I have some games that people usually recommend? XD
Your english is mighty fine, and happy to hear that you enjoy my little game.
Absolutely LOVED this game! The story was fantastic and found myself completely immersed. I can tell you put a lot of effort and lots of your time into this game. Thank you so much for this masterpiece and I cannot wait for future updates!
Happy to hear that you like it.
Great game! I'm completely immersed in this story. Any game that develops a sense of history/lore automatically has my interest, and this VN takes that and runs with it pretty well!
The only issue I'm currently having with it (and I'm only on Chapter 2, so maybe this won't be a thing for long) is there's a considerable change in the writing from Ch1 to Ch2. Chapter 1 was mostly written well but Chapter 2 could use some serious TLC from a proofreader. I don't want to judge too harshly, not knowing if the writer is a native speaker... but so many run-on sentences, missing or incorrect punctuation, subject-verb agreement, so much seems to be all over the place and at times it's jarring to read and distracting from the actual storytelling, which itself is interesting, engaging, and has me invested.
[EDIT/UPDATE]: Can confirm, this didn't stay an issue for long. There are still things here and there, but I'm down to the last chapter and can say it hasn't been a bothersome distraction ever since. Seems to be much less of an issue in later chapters.
But so far that's my only negative critique, and while it's been distracting many times I've still been able to grasp the story, so in the end it hasn't ruined anything for me and ultimately amounts to a nit-pick. I keep wanting to know more, and there are things happening that I didn't expect which is great!
Can't put this one down. Great work overall! 👍👍
I'm happy to hear you like it! I didn’t have a proofreader for Chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4. Now, But some people, set up a Discord group dedicated to fixing the spelling issues in my game. The downside is that I have very little time to implement all the improvements, but I’ll do it slowly over time. (My day job and work on the avn steals all of it.) But i managed add the implementations of Chapter 1 so far. Which is probably why you noticed such a big drop in quality afterward.
Thank you for your game, I really like it and immerse myself in it, I hope your game will be known and loved by more people
Thank you, i hope so as well.
Thanks for your reply! By the way, will Amy be able to recover her memories in the follow-up episodes and let her choose her own future?
Sorry i am not telling what happens in future episodes.
hey, love the game, really enjoyed it! i did notice some spelling and grammar mistakes here and there tho, didnt take me out of it but they were kind of annoying. if you want to i would offer to help you fix them or fix them for you by just going through all of the old text and correcting everything I notice, let me know if i can help you somehow!
Happy to hear to you liked it.
We have on my discord server a small proofreading group, they added alot of suggestions, you can join them as well if you wish.
At first, I played this game with a try it out attitude, but as I continued playing, I found it to be a great game and quickly completed Chapter 9. I am looking forward to its updates and thank you very much for creating this game. I would like to know when its next update will be
Happy to hear that you liked it.
I currently work on Chapter 10.
Just started, but odd occurrence: had gallery scene 1 in autosave, but it is gone once I moved to main game. That is easy enough to fix, but wondering why?
Sorry but i have no idea what you mean.
I mean I unlocked the first gallery scene, but did make an actual save of my own until a few hours later. I think maybe the autosaves had cycled by then, but not sure. At any rate, the first gallery scene now shows as locked, even though I already saw it. Not a big deal; I will try and remember to save after each new scene.
That is weirds, good to know.
İ finished game but i can't unlock 23 Rd scene can someone help me how to unlock 23 Rd scene
Help Blake in chapter 4, as Noel advises you to do.
The time and thought that had to put into writing this, is just unmatched. love the Wow reference and such too, still have yet to finish.. wonder what other references there are?
Glad to hear that you like it so far :D
Can't believe this would be the first game I would write a comment on but bravo, the pacing on the story so far is phenomenal, you really manage drag our emotion like a real dark one.
Happy to hear that you like it :D
If there is one thing that you nailed with this game is the pacing. The story, events and character development was so in sync that I couldn't stopped playing this game and ended up binging the whole thing in 3 days.
I wish I could support you through patreon but I am sorry I can't just yet. But I definitely want to rate your game on itch. Can anyone tell me how I can do that?
Also, looking forward to your next update 😸
If you have an account, which you do, I think you can rate it in the top right corner,
it's a bit more tricky with the phone. You have to hold it horizontally, and then you can rate at the top of the page.
Also, hope you will like my future updates as well.Only in English?
Officially only in English, correct.
There are fan translations, for example into spanish, but they have nothing to do with me, so download at your own risk.
Ok, thanks.
Can anyone recommend where I can get myself a dark one, a primordial would be preferred. Jokes aside, as @NightMarine said, on par with Eternum for me as well. Awesome story, awesome action and I dont just mean the NSFW stuff. The amount of limbs coming off is perfect in my opinion as well. Keep up the good work!
Happy to hear that you like my little game :D
probably on par with eternum for me, cant wait for more updates!
Thanks!
And i hope you will also like the new content.
I'm sure i will :)
Do you mind making a list of the type of content and/or fetishes in the game. Pretty please.
i think there is a list of them in my discord server.
Somemade made that.