Heyo. Game's good so far. Story is interesting. Characters are likeable.
But your proofreading needs a bit of work. I mean misspelling "doctor" is embarrassing really :P "alot" is not a word. Literally doesn't exist. And I'm assuming you just flipped a coin for using either "a" or "an" Also don't directly translate a German idiom. "sicheren Tod" is "certain death" not "safe death" xD Even Google translate knows that :P Lastly, and this one you should know since you Germans (I'm assuming you're German) are so fond of capitalizing every noun; names are capitalized in English. That includes the names of countries.
I'm honestly not trying to be an ass. Just trying to help you improve
just saying you fit right in that troupe of saying "not trying to be a [insert and term]" then proceeding to be a [insert term again]. Could have just called out the typos and left it there is all.
First of all, thank you for the grammar improvements. And secondly, I have to agree with Waffle, this could have been expressed more diplomatically. And that something could be worse is not an argument, haha it could always be worse. Not only on the internet. Our goal should be to be as nice as possible and not the other way around. But dont worry it doesnt bother me personaly i will thank you again, for taking your time and pointing out my grammar mistakes, since i am not very good grammarwise, even in my mother tongue, so it is helpful.
Everything about this is masterpiece i mean all of it like seriously especially the story line man the fact that i finish it just in 2days since i started it now it's one of my top 5 favorite! For that i can't wait for the next update this is such amazing recommend
Also shit i think i fell in love with noel cuz i can't stop thinking about it since then lol
I just wanna say, this story has no business being THIS good. I don't know what I was expecting, but certainly not this. Easily in my top 10 VNs ever read.
There is no WK, as far as i know. but i do not punish you for a decision, that you made 4 chapters ago. Just play the way you think is right. This is not a game where you have to play meta to participate in raids. Like be nice to Clara and Clara likes you. Make it your story
None that I think I can share here. But Neostudio v2 is the studio version of honey select 2. If you search for that, you will probably find it very quickly.
Wow another hidden gem i found for my library....nice work dev, i love the story so far and the char...i love the congress event when the other games char appears such wartribe academy, sicae(lcc), icaros even from eternum(luna) at the end of this vers :D
Oh can you make some feature to adjust the opacity of the textbox?
Can't wait for the next update(hell cos i want my noel back :D)
I've finished the game so far, and I'm amazed at how immersive the adventure of this game can be, lots of twists and surprises, badass characters and beautiful girls, especially Noel who is my favorite by far, congratulations to Dev, very creative for writing a story with so many details :)
Good afternoon, would it be possible to return with apklite? My phone freezes and quits the game during the sex scenes because it's a little old and there are a lot of effects in the game.
That actually doesnt matter, scene all of the special effects are prerendered pictures. So all the programm does is showing an image. I try to keep them as lite as possible. What i can offer you is a compressed version for the pc, this will have the same values as the app version, but will also look like a mobile version. (worse picture, sound and video quality. Which is not noticeable on a cell phone but very much on pc).
It freezes in every scene but it must be because my cell phone is bad and I can only play until the scene where the protagonist has sex with the girl with red hair (I forgot her name)
pregnancy is already in the game (even if only very little by now.) But there will be more pregnancy content. Especially when there are more endings and the story moves forward. Pregnancy is a great way to illustrate the progress of a relationship
Could someone answer me if this game works on my cell phone with it having 2 RAM? It's a moto g 8, the game looks really cool but I'm afraid to go out alone on my phone. (Sorry if my English is very bad, I'm Brazilian and I'm using Google translator)
To be honest i cant really tell. theoretically it should work, but I can't promise anything. But there should be a spanish version of my game online. Not from me, some fan translations maybe you would enjoy that more
Game caught my eye while scrolling on itch. Downloaded and played it and I can say it did not disappoint. Story is great and I want more. Hype to play chapter 5 in the future. Hope the dev would keep on improving the game and it's quality like the equipment of characters and effects.
This one is better than my expectation... Remain on story, very creative ideas you put there(about how dark companion works), many scenes that caught my attention(some references)... Ive seen some similarity of this game it s like the twist of "Eternum"(about game thingy and level high rank stuff) and "Depth Revival"(the school plot, companion and character like Amy similarity to Sarah of this game)
I like it more than the Eternum you did great kudos to your team 👍 I cant wait the chapter 5, the real battle begin!(maybe the last episode?) And need some Amy exposure that s all ^_^
Great game but I gotta say there just seems to be a lot of spelling errors most are minor but I'd have to go back through the game but there was a few times I had to stop and re-read the page a few times before I finally understood what was meant to be said.
Oh no it's fine it's just something I noticed a lot of. If you could go back and proof read some of that or have someone volunteer to do that, that would be nice. But the game is overall good.
Just ran through the game again, no glitches or crashes in the areas that gave me issues last time. With that said, at least for my tablet, the issue is resolved
Loved E-4 Tho I would think that Reality it self would stop someone from being so much of an Asshat. Glad B was there to Smack it down some. Shame that someone/thing cannot drain it down to a Single S.
Very good VN. tho Same as Dominornex in 3-4 Places i had only Black screens, and one that said it was Missing a Pic. Now I would have thought the #4 would go to Clare's Mom Not a Young Adult (even if it did not work out) After all if the Mom got #4 Both Mother and Daughter would have Power and more than Likely Help the MC out
Tho i think that the first words out of Metals Dark one would have been something that would help Matt Out not send him of a Revenge Hunt.
Looked down the forum a bit, but didn't see anything to help, so I will ask. During Clara's masturbation scene, an again During the dream sex. The game keeps crashing. Any suggestions? I just went back and took the road less naughty. Oh, on android
yes i can guess why, it's because the animations are a bit bloated compared to the rest and the can make trouble if loaded. especially with phones with not so much ram, it can lead to a crash. good that you messaged me, i have already downsized the files, but will do it again and this time much stronger. Will release the patch with chapter 4 since its about to be published anyway.
looking forward to it - at first the story felt rather cliched (imaginary cute helper, new city, childhood friend and faux mum - classical coming of age male power fantasy) but the unwarranted murder of whatshisname (Michael?) opened up a rather interesting second plot layer
Happy to hear it. I love a good fight scene, and the images and text worked well together to make them interesting.
Bit unrelated, but (without potentially spoiling too much for others) seeing Noel walk out of the dark with her eyes changed and dragging a person at the same time the music changes was very nicely crafted. Gives a good "alien" feel to it that seems appropriate for an ancient dark creature. Course, I'd say it shows well every time her eyes change. That's a nifty touch.
yes this is also one of my favorite scenes. Hope you will also like chapter 3, it is close to completion. even if there are a little less fighting scenes
You are the first game to let me know to save before the end of the current build, and for that alone you have earned a comment. You being added to my waiting for update folder was because despite some grammar issues I loved the story so far. Good luck on your journey, and thanks for the game.
Text could use some outlines to make it easier to read. Don't forget to change the version number in options.rpy and adding a main menu theme would be nice. Including your info in the About page is also a good idea.
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Heyo.
Game's good so far.
Story is interesting.
Characters are likeable.
But your proofreading needs a bit of work.
I mean misspelling "doctor" is embarrassing really :P
"alot" is not a word. Literally doesn't exist.
And I'm assuming you just flipped a coin for using either "a" or "an"
Also don't directly translate a German idiom. "sicheren Tod" is "certain death" not "safe death" xD Even Google translate knows that :P
Lastly, and this one you should know since you Germans (I'm assuming you're German) are so fond of capitalizing every noun; names are capitalized in English. That includes the names of countries.
I'm honestly not trying to be an ass. Just trying to help you improve
And I really did enjoy the game.
PS. English is my 3rd language, German my 2nd ;)
could have came off a little better
It could also have been a hell of a lot worse.
You new to the internet? ;)
just saying you fit right in that troupe of saying "not trying to be a [insert and term]" then proceeding to be a [insert term again]. Could have just called out the typos and left it there is all.
First of all, thank you for the grammar improvements. And secondly, I have to agree with Waffle, this could have been expressed more diplomatically. And that something could be worse is not an argument, haha it could always be worse. Not only on the internet. Our goal should be to be as nice as possible and not the other way around. But dont worry it doesnt bother me personaly i will thank you again, for taking your time and pointing out my grammar mistakes, since i am not very good grammarwise, even in my mother tongue, so it is helpful.
Hey I made you a compliment sandwich. I was plenty of nice ;)
Why the scene alway blackscreen ? :/
I guess you used the apk version?
It was an error and should be fixed now.
I have a question how and where do you put the save file on Android device
sorry i dont know the answer for that.
as i dont use my android phone for anything more than messenger apps.
Dam alot have hapend sice i last played 2 whole chapters and a rework of chaptor 1. hope chaptor 4 and 5 is as good as chaptor 1-3 was for me :)
Hope you will like it :P
i sure did just finished it sad to see emma in the end tho, cant wait to see how it will unfold in chaptor
Everything about this is masterpiece i mean all of it like seriously especially the story line man the fact that i finish it just in 2days since i started it now it's one of my top 5 favorite! For that i can't wait for the next update this is such amazing recommend
Also shit i think i fell in love with noel cuz i can't stop thinking about it since then lol
Hey glad to hear that you liked it :D
Soon there will be news about the next chapters.
so stay tuned :P
I just wanna say, this story has no business being THIS good. I don't know what I was expecting, but certainly not this. Easily in my top 10 VNs ever read.
Glad to hear that you like the story :D
Is there any repeat scane?
Sorry, I do not quite understand you
I mean is there a replays scane on this game?
Oh 1 more things how do you hide text box on Android??
No not at the moment, but there should be for the next update. And there is no replay scenes gallery,
ahh shitt , well thanks anyway 🗿
Is there a walkthrough for the game?
There is no WK, as far as i know. but i do not punish you for a decision, that you made 4 chapters ago.
Just play the way you think is right. This is not a game where you have to play meta to participate in raids.
Like be nice to Clara and Clara likes you.
Make it your story
Gotchu, thanks!
First of all glad to hear that you think my game is nice.
Neither of them, I just use the default assets of Neostudio. :D
None that I think I can share here. But Neostudio v2 is the studio version of honey select 2. If you search for that, you will probably find it very quickly.
Haha, glad to that you had fun :D
This is an awesome VN im Like consumed the Story haha cant wait until next chapter is released to public 😄😁
Glad to hear that you liked it :P
is therre sounds on the animation scenes?
There is music and minor sound effects during scenes.
Wow another hidden gem i found for my library....nice work dev, i love the story so far and the char...i love the congress event when the other games char appears such wartribe academy, sicae(lcc), icaros even from eternum(luna) at the end of this vers :D
Oh can you make some feature to adjust the opacity of the textbox?
Can't wait for the next update(hell cos i want my noel back :D)
Excellent works dev !! Cheers to you :)
Glad to hear that you like it.
But I must admit, you see more cameos than I put into the game.
Wait, pc is v6 and android is v3?
Btw this is really good game, although i haven't finished it yet
No the are the same version, both are chapter 5. I just forgot to change the name of the apk for 2 updates.
Oh and i am happy to hear that you like the game so far <3
thanks XD
I've finished the game so far, and I'm amazed at how immersive the adventure of this game can be, lots of twists and surprises, badass characters and beautiful girls, especially Noel who is my favorite by far, congratulations to Dev, very creative for writing a story with so many details :)
Haha happy to hear that.
Im glad you liked the game :P
Good afternoon, would it be possible to return with apklite? My phone freezes and quits the game during the sex scenes because it's a little old and there are a lot of effects in the game.
It would be nice to have the option to lower the graphics/Visual effects for weaker computers and cell phones in the settings.
That actually doesnt matter, scene all of the special effects are prerendered pictures. So all the programm does is showing an image. I try to keep them as lite as possible.
What i can offer you is a compressed version for the pc, this will have the same values as the app version, but will also look like a mobile version. (worse picture, sound and video quality. Which is not noticeable on a cell phone but very much on pc).
Hey there, the current apk is the lite version.
The game became so big that a normal version wouldnt work as apk.
At what scene does the game freeze?
It freezes in every scene but it must be because my cell phone is bad and I can only play until the scene where the protagonist has sex with the girl with red hair (I forgot her name)
Hmm i see. Sorry i can´t find a solution for that. you either have to play on pc or skip the scenes.
From chapter 4 onwards the scenes.
The scenes use a different kind of media. so that could work.
I know I am not really helpful, I'm sorry
absolutely loved the game keep up the great work I cant wait for chapter 5, on another note though is pregnancy planned at all?
pregnancy is already in the game (even if only very little by now.)
But there will be more pregnancy content. Especially when there are more endings and the story moves forward. Pregnancy is a great way to illustrate the progress of a relationship
This might be a dumb question but does this game will have non-harem endings?
there is one, but after you choose it and it plays you go back to the choice to continue the story xD
Lenguage spanish??
Not official. There are some online, but they were not created by me. Only fan translations
Could someone answer me if this game works on my cell phone with it having 2 RAM? It's a moto g 8, the game looks really cool but I'm afraid to go out alone on my phone. (Sorry if my English is very bad, I'm Brazilian and I'm using Google translator)
To be honest i cant really tell. theoretically it should work, but I can't promise anything. But there should be a spanish version of my game online. Not from me, some fan translations maybe you would enjoy that more
Game caught my eye while scrolling on itch. Downloaded and played it and I can say it did not disappoint. Story is great and I want more. Hype to play chapter 5 in the future. Hope the dev would keep on improving the game and it's quality like the equipment of characters and effects.
Im happy that you liked my game, i always try to improve :D
Amazing game homie. Was surprised how good this is, keep up the great work.
Aww thank you, im glad that you liked it.
This one is better than my expectation... Remain on story, very creative ideas you put there(about how dark companion works), many scenes that caught my attention(some references)... Ive seen some similarity of this game it s like the twist of "Eternum"(about game thingy and level high rank stuff) and "Depth Revival"(the school plot, companion and character like Amy similarity to Sarah of this game)
I like it more than the Eternum you did great kudos to your team 👍 I cant wait the chapter 5, the real battle begin!(maybe the last episode?) And need some Amy exposure that s all ^_^
(4.6★/5) for me
Thank you very much :P
Btw im a solo-dev no team :D
That s even more great! ✨ I hope they find this gem game and get s more appreciate
do the scenes have sounds if not no biggie i will still play
There are soundeffects and sounds ingame.
finally got it to download from itchi.io :D the great advancer awaits.
Have fun :D
I can't download the game it keeps telling me there a network error, my network works just fine.?
Thats strange. Just tested it i can download completely normal. But there are lot of other place were you can download the game, like lewdzone or f95.
ok thank you :D
Great game but I gotta say there just seems to be a lot of spelling errors most are minor but I'd have to go back through the game but there was a few times I had to stop and re-read the page a few times before I finally understood what was meant to be said.
Yes english, grammar and spelling, are really not my strengths. Sorry if this has ruined your experience with the game
Oh no it's fine it's just something I noticed a lot of. If you could go back and proof read some of that or have someone volunteer to do that, that would be nice. But the game is overall good.
fwiw, here a a few :)
./script.rpy:14105: additionaly->additionally
./script.rpy:16456: apperance->appearance
./script.rpy:14880: controll->control
./script.rpy:5940, ./script.rpy:10482, ./script.rpy:13803, ./script.rpy:13816, ./script.rpy:18382: happend->happened
./script.rpy:21116: memeber->member
./script.rpy:21978: recived->received
./script.rpy:12809, ./script.rpy:14502: remeber->remember
./script.rpy:22368: satelite->satellite
./script.rpy:22551: emma->Emma clara->Clara seperated->separated
./script.rpy:19295, ./script.rpy:21076, ./script.rpy:23093: didnt->didn't
./script.rpy:18897: doesnt->doesn't
./script.rpy:16673, ./script.rpy:22812: isnt->isn't
./script.rpy:727, ./script.rpy:895, ./script.rpy:1189, ./script.rpy:1333, ./script.rpy:1798, ./script.rpy:3117, ./script.rpy:3383, ./script.rpy:19090, ./script.rpy:19204, ./script.rpy:22927: lets->let's
./script.rpy:2912, ./script.rpy:3523, ./script.rpy:4679: wont->won't
./script.rpy:13452: more then->more than
./script.rpy:17156: lets->let
Thank you, fixed it :P
All I have to say is I hope that isnt the end of Noel I love her
I like her aswell :D
Ch 4 was awesome. Hype for ch 5
Thank you :P
Ok dude, you are now fucking awesome. You threw war tribe in there, i love that one, and love magna, who made an appearance
Glad you liked that. Did it now work on your phone?
I have not gone back to replay yet. I will do so after I finish playing the update.
Just ran through the game again, no glitches or crashes in the areas that gave me issues last time. With that said, at least for my tablet, the issue is resolved
Awesome
thanks for checking
Loved E-4 Tho I would think that Reality it self would stop someone from being so much of an Asshat. Glad B was there to Smack it down some. Shame that someone/thing cannot drain it down to a Single S.
Im happy that you liked chapter 4
Very good VN. tho Same as Dominornex in 3-4 Places i had only Black screens, and one that said it was Missing a Pic.
Now I would have thought the #4 would go to Clare's Mom Not a Young Adult (even if it did not work out) After all if the Mom got #4 Both Mother and Daughter would have Power and more than Likely Help the MC out
Tho i think that the first words out of Metals Dark one would have been something that would help Matt Out not send him of a Revenge Hunt.
Hey there, I am glad that you liked it, the problems should be fixed with the release of chapter 4.
Which releases at the end of the month
Check the Other Page also Please
What other page?
the Page from the Game page
>>>Submission to r/goodadultgamming jam<<< that Page
Looked down the forum a bit, but didn't see anything to help, so I will ask. During Clara's masturbation scene, an again During the dream sex. The game keeps crashing. Any suggestions? I just went back and took the road less naughty. Oh, on android
yes i can guess why, it's because the animations are a bit bloated compared to the rest and the can make trouble if loaded.
especially with phones with not so much ram, it can lead to a crash.
good that you messaged me, i have already downsized the files, but will do it again and this time much stronger.
Will release the patch with chapter 4 since its about to be published anyway.
thank you for the reply, and the info.
sorry to be that guy but i wanna ask - Next update when?
oh i was just waiting for someone to ask...
i think i'll be done with chapter 4 by the end of the month.
one day more or less... but i think that is very realistic
is this an one kinda girl or an harem?
It's more harem like, but not every girl is an LI.
a few typos and missing images
script.rpy:13943: additionaly->additionally
script.rpy:16291: apperance->appearance
script.rpy:14715: controll->control
script.rpy:5787, script.rpy:13656: happend->happened
script.rpy:12649, script.rpy:14337: remeber->remember
script.rpy:16508: isnt->isn't
script.rpy:5371 'bf4' is not an image.
script.rpy:6036 'aa17' is not an image.
script.rpy:6613 'back' is not an image.
script.rpy:6823 'back' is not an image.
Thanks for pointing ou.t
I'll make sure to fix them when i upload the next update. :D
looking forward to it - at first the story felt rather cliched (imaginary cute helper, new city, childhood friend and faux mum - classical coming of age male power fantasy) but the unwarranted murder of whatshisname (Michael?) opened up a rather interesting second plot layer
thanks for the praise, that was exactly my plan. First start with something known and familiar to then present the new and special.
Absolutely love this game hope to see more
Glad you like it.
I will try to do my best😃
Got through chapter 2 and really enjoyed it. Loved the action.
Thank you so much for the praise. I put a lot of effort into the battle scenes.
And you are the first to say that they liked them. Really warms my heart :)
Happy to hear it. I love a good fight scene, and the images and text worked well together to make them interesting.
Bit unrelated, but (without potentially spoiling too much for others) seeing Noel walk out of the dark with her eyes changed and dragging a person at the same time the music changes was very nicely crafted. Gives a good "alien" feel to it that seems appropriate for an ancient dark creature. Course, I'd say it shows well every time her eyes change. That's a nifty touch.
The alternate ending near the end was neat, too.
yes this is also one of my favorite scenes.
Hope you will also like chapter 3, it is close to completion.
even if there are a little less fighting scenes
Looking forward to it.
You are the first game to let me know to save before the end of the current build, and for that alone you have earned a comment. You being added to my waiting for update folder was because despite some grammar issues I loved the story so far. Good luck on your journey, and thanks for the game.
Lunalis Nocturne
Thanks for the praise, I'm glad you liked the story.
Yes, I have to accept the criticism with the grammar, English is not my native language and I still have a hard time with it.
Text could use some outlines to make it easier to read.
Don't forget to change the version number in options.rpy and adding a main menu theme would be nice.
Including your info in the About page is also a good idea.
https://mega.nz/file/qbZl0J6K#v2-SdmtR-kKuWnRcrbeVn2URVVBnoktTsR4l3bdqvDA
Hey there, thanks for your input. I already outlined the text, but i guess i could make it bigger.
How nice of you to create something like this, I did not expect that. thank you very much
hey i liked chapter 2 even more, keep up the good work.
Thank your sir